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Verse Novels Exploring poetic form in Young Adult Literature

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What led me down the path of verse novels came from my first encounter with one, being The Poet X by Elizabeth Acevedo. Throughout my encounter with this book I was continually shocked, and in many ways remain so. This form felt so incredibly powerful and it was unlike anything I had ever seen. I had read epics, but of course nothing contemporary, and nothing which opened up a modern space for poetry to sit in quite like this.

Naturally, after my encounter with The Poet X I became interested in other verse novels which were out there, and more largely in the place which poetry had in the YA genre. Eventually I encountered Crank by Ellen Hopkins, and these are the books which I will be looking at here.

My encounter with The Poet X began my thinking towards the work I do with young women at the Turning Point halfway house, here in Fort Collins, CO, through my work as an intern for SpeakOut! Creative Writing Workshops. One thing I noticed is the prevalence of poetry as a form for these young women to express themselves creatively. But why? What about poetry is enticing to young writers and readers? And further, why did these authors use poetic form in their work? What are the advantages of poetry as a form within the YA canon? And how does this relate to how young adults are expressing themselves in writing today?

I wondered if there might be some neurological implication to this inclination towards poetry as a form of expression and if the verse novels were tapping into something key to the YA mind. I began to feel this intuitively as I read the verse myself. To me, it seemed that the fragmentary quality of the poetry, or its pace, or its ability to--as Kelly Bingham, author of Shark Girl described it--"jump right in [and] ... get straight into the heart of [the] character." (Meyer) would really appeal to the YA mind. For this, I decided to do some research into how poetry takes place in our brains, not just on a page.

One reason which might explain why my writers gravitated towards poetry, and what makes it such a powerful YA form, has to do with the fact that our neurology seems to be naturally inclined to recognize it. According to Patrick Kiger in his article "The Human Brain is Hardwired for Poetry," "In one newly published study in the journal Frontiers of Psychology, researchers at the UK's Bangor University read an assortment of sentences to a group of Welsh-speaking subjects. Some of the sentences conformed to the intricate poetic construction rules of Cynghanedd, a traditional form of Welsh poetry, while others didn't follow those rules. Though the subjects didn't know anything about Cynghanedd, they nevertheless categorized as "good" the sentences that followed the rules as compared to other sentences." (Kiger)

He goes on further to quote psychology professor Guillaume Thierry who helped conduct this study, "I believe that our results argue for a profoundly intuitive origin of poetry ... Poetry appears to be 'built in,' it is like a profound intuition, every human being is an unconscious poet." (Kiger) This placement of poetry within a biological context has deep implications for why we write poetry, and why it is effective. Beyond literary analysis, beyond the other advantages which poetry brings, it seems that poetry taps into something deeply biological and psychologically rewarding.

Utilizing functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI), researchers have been able to closely examine how the human brain responds to poetry. They have found in our neurology an innate recognition of the rhymes and rhythms which poets use, and which make them distinct from prose, speech, and other more ordinary forms of writing. Additionally, they've found that some of the same areas which are utilized to help us interpret our everyday reality, are also activated in the act of contemplation which poetry lends itself, and the in the layered nature of poetic meaning,

In a 2013 study published in the Journal of Consciousness Studies, researchers at the UK's University of Exeter had participants "lay inside an fMRI scanner while they read various texts on a screen. The selections ranged from deliberately dull prose — such as a section from a heating equipment installation manual — and passages from novels to samples from various poems. The subjects had to rate the texts on qualities such as how much emotion they aroused, and how "literary," or difficult to contemplate, they were." (Kiger)

"The researchers found that the higher the degree of emotiveness that subjects assigned to a sample, the more activation that the scans showed in areas on the right side of the brain — many of the same ones identified in a 2001 study as being activated by music that moved listeners to feel chills or shivers down their spines." (Kiger) This shows that there is an inherent musical quality to poetry which our brain responds to. When I worked with the Turning Point boys last year, they always had one earpod in--it was clear that music was a very important part of their life. Rappers and musicians are often reflected in the poetic environment of today. In fact, one could easily argue that this is the primary way in which young adults are introduced to poetry or writing creatively. The current intern for the boys group actually had an experience where the boys in the workshop ended up writing their own raps and shared those with the group, even though the prompt did not exactly tell them to do so. So, it seems that this musical quality of poetry is another factor which drives young adult's interest in poetry as a mode of expression.

Music is instantly rewarding -- the moment you feel that drop, or that perfect note, or that beat, there is an instant rush of pleasure. People can even identify different sounds as sounding heavier and sadder, or sounding lighter and happier. Often, this doesn't require any kind of interrogation or analysis, it is simply an innate feeling. Poetry they found, is rewarding as well, but not precisely in the same way. According to Philip Davis, professor and director of Exeter's Institute of Psychology, Health and Society, "The poetic work triggered different parts of the brain related to non-automatic processing of meaning, leading to increased lively activation of mind and a simultaneous sense of psychological reward." So, what is rewarding about poetry is in its complexity and layeredness. Poetry doesn't reveal itself all at once, instead it asks for "lively activation of the mind." This layeredness is precisely what makes poetry an effective form for the writers I work with, as well as the authors I'll be examining. It is the complexity and nuance of poetry which allows for more to be accomplished in a smaller amount of space and which contributes to the sense of reward one feels upon finishing a poem, or finishing a novel in verse. Less becomes more, what is not said becomes just as important as what is said.

This analysis of the neurology of poetry gets us closer to understanding why poetry is such a prevalent creative form for young adults to use. Often, the writers are using their poetry as a therapeutic tool to help them reflect, gain perspective, and tap into their memories and emotions. And the research seems to show, poetry is optimal for this.

Additionally, it points to some of the advantages of writing in verse, and in reading a verse novel. The form is already predisposed to elicit a certain kind of neurological response -- it then becomes the responsibility of the author to maximize that and use it to its full potential. And I think that Acevedo and Hopkins do this in ways that are both effective, yet unique to their own style and what their novels were trying to accomplish.

This is a piece submitted by a writer in my workshop who writes under the name "Lady Goon." In this piece, the movement from beginning to end, in broken promises, is so painful. The reflection is a key thing to notice here. She is using the form to enter into a memory, and reflect on how she exists in relationship to it now. This points towards the introspection and awareness which neuroscience has shown poetry to be so apt at tapping into.

We see a similar reflection in the last stanza of the poem "Names" in The Poet X. The line breaks force the reader to read each line as a separate unit, and in this way cuts the unity between them. This creates an effect in which the penultimate line "they got combat boots and a mouth silent" runs into the image of the machete at the end of the following line. Here, Acevedo uses poetic form as a means to emphasize and expand the emotion of her content. This provides the reader with a deeper look into the mind of X, without requiring any further elucidation. This is one of the fundamental attributes of poetic form, specifically in YA: a lot can be achieved in a small amount of space.

This movement is further exemplified in the poem "Mami Works" in which Acevedo is able to move from the beginning of Mami's work day to its end in the space of a single stanza. Additionally, she was able to enrich this movement with deep characterization by attaching the image of her work to "her well-worn Bible." The sense of fervor with which her hands work is shown to also take place in how she practices her religion.

In the next stanza, she utilizes what she accomplished in the previous and attaches it to Xiomara. Here is where we find out that "if it were [X] / [she'd] prop [her] head against the metal train wall ... and try [her] best to dream." The image which is captured here creates a distinct rift between X and her mom. This sets up the nature of a relationship which is only further developed later on. And all of this occurs within the space of 125 words.

Here Acevedo captures a small moment of two hands finding each other beneath a desk within a poem. And because of the nature of the form, the space within that container is maximized to bring about the maximum emotion. In particular, the line "like me. If he's frontin'" accomplishes so much. It lets the reader into how X is approaching this situation, while also letting us into her thoughts about how Aman is responding and thinking about the situation. And this reflection of hers goes beyond this mere moment -- but is a point by which she reflects on their whole relationship. All of this occurs within a single line. Here the form allows for a quickness which does not have to sacrifice richness of detail nor emotion. This is at the core of what makes poetry such a strong YA form. Less becomes more, and this allows for the reader to also accomplish much more in a shorter space of time, but still feel like they got a full experience.

Another piece from Lady Goon -- here she writes about the pain of being othered, specifically in a relationship. Additionally, we see a similar form as the weight of the poem comes crashing down into the moment of reflection in the last line. That key realization which sparks emotion. Here, poetry is used to process a past relationship -- and part of what makes it an effective medium is its fragmentary nature. You don't need to explain the whole relationship. We don't even need context. But you are still able to grasp the pain, and the realization at the end, here the maxim "less is more" really comes to fruition, as it does in The Poet X. This last line functions as "a lantern glowing in the dark."(342) of that painful reflection.
A similar quickness is developed in the poem "Not Quite Silent" in Ellen Hopkin's novel Crank. Here, we get a sense of a room -- but not just a room, the emptiness that fills the room. The "imagined rooms" carry the weight of a broken childhood dream as Kristina realizes the reality of how her father actually lives. We get the sense that just as these rooms are "imagined" Kristina imagined something much better for her father. There is a shallow decrepitness and emptiness which creates the space for Kristina to enter into the world of "the monster." So we see in poetry, there is a storytelling element in what is not said, just as much as what is said.
Having just returned home, freshly introduced to "the Monster" we return to the image of the room. Hopkins formatted this poem in such a way that the word "Regardless" holds the whole poem together. The reader returns from each letter, back into the room, and at first read is most likely confused until they piece the whole poem together and see the whole picture later. By utilizing form in this way Hopkins disorients her reader much in the same way Kristina is disoriented as she returns to a life and a room, which no longer feels her own, but "regardless" is still familiar. This poem embodies the tension between Kristina and Bree, as the acrostic challenges and supports the inner content of the room/poem.
A similar form is employed by Chaeli in this poem here. The "I' holds the whole poem together and is returned to recursively as she reflects on a past relationship. This "I," grows in effect as the poem layers decision upon decision, realization upon realization, until the reality of a conclusion comes crashing down at the end. Pain is held up in this poem but the recursive return of the acrostic centers it in the now, and within that tension room is made for a third thing to arise out of an encounter with this memory, this relationship. Similarly, we get the sense of something new arising out of the tension between who Kristina was, and who she is turning into--that tension between Kristina and Bree is recreated in the form which both of these poems employ. I think we see a similar tension between who the author has been in the past, and who she has let into her life, and who she is/wants to become now.
Hopkins continues to develop this tension between Kristina and Bree; between what "the monster" wants and what she wants. The nature of the poem makes these two people--the person and the drug and their desires--almost indistinguishable. The form establishes a dependency, yet an inherent separateness. The reader could decide to read the poem one vertical column at a time, or from left to right in its entirety. Each column stands alone, but yet are held together by one another. Each poem feeds off the other, much like the relationship between Kristina and Bree, and much like the tension between the "I" of now, and the "I' of the past in Chaeli's poem.
This poem captures the mesmeric movement of Kristina's internal dialogue in its form, as one thought nears completion another has already begun. She begins a movement through time as each stanza moves from reflection to the moment upon which is being reflected. The final line straddles this movement and resolves the tension which this poem, as well as the many others before it have been building. This final line "I would not abort my baby" signals the integration of the wills of Kristina and Bree, and this meaning is amplified by its concrete position which straddles the middle ground of the poem.

Clearly, poetry as a form has something very unique to bring to young adults as a story telling medium. From my experience with SpeakOut! I have seen first hand young adults gravitate toward this form and accomplish great things with it. It was my inclination that there was something deeply rewarding in the nature of the form itself. I wondered, why were these girls writing poetry? And some of these answers are found in the verse of Ellen Hopkins and Elizabeth Acevedo.

Poetry creates a space in which what is not said is just as powerful as what is said. It creates room for rhythm and music, it taps into parts of our brains which help us feel and reflect. It allows the page to become part of the work, and allows for multiple elements of storytelling to occur all at once. It creates a sense of real accomplishment and power in a short amount of space and time. It allows the writer, or the reader, to dive right into the subject without feeling like something is missing. In fact, it seems that what is missing becomes entirely part of the magic. And all of these are great advantages, whether you are trying to author your own story, or read another's.

Works Cited

Acevedo, Elizabeth, and Silvina Poch. Poet X. Puck, 2019.

Hopkins, Ellen. Crank. Margaret K. McElderry Books, 2013.

Kiger, Patrick J. “The Human Brain Is Hardwired for Poetry.” HowStuffWorks Science, HowStuffWorks, 9 Dec. 2020, science.howstuffworks.com/life/inside-the-mind/human-brain/how-poetry-affects-human-brain.htm.

Meyer, Fred. “Writing the Young Adult Poetry Novel: Interview with Kelly Bingham.” Writers.com, 5 Nov. 2019, writers.com/writing-the-young-adult-poetry-novel-interview-with-kelly-bingham.

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